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Thursday 27 September 2018

Astria Countdown To Impact

“Students don’t learn much playing this game called Astria – Countdown to Impact: Their time could be better spent doing other things”.

Do you agree, disagree or partly agree/disagree?

Reading this comment I partly disagree. In this writing I will be explaining why I disagree. This activity/game is very useful if you ask me. Why you may ask? Well this game contains cool characters, exploring new places, learning new stronger vocab and many more, and if you enjoy space this is the game for you. This game helps to try notice if a reading is bias, what source is reliable Click for example(Site that is not reliable), and facts. You read a story and see how good the facts, source and bias is you rate between highest and lowest.


Two sides of the story. I also partly agree, why? I partly agree because this game has a lot of suggestions. This game is for kids and with a little tweak kids will attract it more. In my opinion I suppose that they should also add audio, because parents and adults know well the kids don't enjoy reading, but do like stories. They should also add more animations because it is more kids style. They had cool charters, but since it has to do something about space they should add space creatures such as aliens. They should also add grooving and hype music just to keep kids entertained. This game contains an amount of time you have so I also agree that they should make the days slower. Creators of this game should also write some encouraging messages for kids who will just give up. This is an good idea so kids know it is alright to make a mistake.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Mafi from what I from your work it is fantastic. You have two sides of the story which is great. You really put so many interesting words that made feel to read more about what is happening. What was your favourite part about the game? Mine was
    when I met Geeksta.

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