The Hospital Party
“Help!” cried Adam as he fell to his knees. “What happened” asked mum.She saw that Adam had a broken leg so Adam stayed with mum as dad went to go ring the ambulance. Then they arrived ,and they all rushed to Adam.
First he just woke up ,and remembered that it was his best friend Tim’s birthday ,and wanted to go but he couldn’t.So the nurse got him some pens , colours ,and even paper ,and he made a fantastic card for Tim.Then his dad popped up “Hi Adam”, said his dad ,but Adam didn’t replied, he just looked up at him sadly , and said “I don’t want to stay inside the hospital ,I want to go to Tim's party” then looked at the window.But before he knew it, he saw his best friend Tim arrived with his parents, and four other children. “Here is a present for you Adam” said Tim . “But it is not my birthday”, replied Adam .“ just take it”,said Tim , and Adam did .It was a red fast car.
A few weeks later Adam got out of hospital , both him, and his best friend were playing with their amazing cars together. The End
Good recount Mafi.WELL DONE
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